It's alright.
The awful sound really killed it for me, it'll only work for an 64-bit-ish game ;P It's a little too fast and intense, even for a fight scene. It's should be more clean, clear, and uses regular phrases, cause you're all over the place. The distorted piano would work much better if you had a guitarist playing it. If you can tab it, I'm up for it.
Good luck!
P.S. - Return the favor (of reviewing)?
I don't think it's that awful. O-o And music is never too fast for a fight!
Has a very "Epic" feeling.
Good. I can see the the armies marching to the battle, with a smile across their lips and grime on their weapons, when listening to this. Good job. It delivers the idea, and it does it well. It misses that "spark" that will make it come alive, but it's really good besides that.
I think that use of a solo insrtument, or 2 solo instruments going counterpoint crazy will be awesome.
P.S. - Seeing you are so generous, return the favor again? XD
I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the rewiev. I'll see what can I do to fix it.
Very monotone.
Not that good.
The 4/4 clapping made it very monotone, and the single synth reapeting the note over and over again so fastly was very unbecoming to the ear.
The synth actually clipped here and there - it really was annoying. Here's a way to avoid this - before you upload the song to NewGrounds, listen to it in headphones, speakers, and your (or someone else's) car. That way you can make sure that it doesn't audably clip.
Try to use beats that are more intresting besides 4/4 (listening to shuffle, jazz and swing really gives my ideas for good drum beats, try it). Using more instruments, one for rythem (chords) and a few for solo is a great and very reliable way to create a nice sounding loop.
Good luck!
ive been listening to shuffle n other electros =]
but this 1 was only a loop thut i came up whit... in a mater of minutes xD
so i dident rly work on it but since it sounded kinda good (my opinion) i decided to upload it :P
it clipped? havent noticed it...but thx man...ima start listening to more swing n shuffle..
thx for the review ='D
peace out DrX
Tight!
You know I am a blues rock man, but I really liked this, mate! Good job!
Thanks yo! Check out my song "Box Me a Beat", I fully invite you to hop on the track with some guitar. I don't know the chords off hand, I can PM them to ya sometime later (if I don't remind me)! My keyboard is hooked up to my computer and it's easy as hell to record now, lets do some more jamming!
Lol and sounds great!
I saw your response to my other review (in the Jazz Detective track), and came here to hear.
You're like the NewGrounds Igudisman and Joo. Do you know them? They're awesome, did something like what you did, only they combined a Mozart piece (I don't remember which one) with the 007 James Bond theme :)
Good work!
Igudisman and Joo are geniuses, they mock things in a very unique and cultural way...
Thanx for review and flattering comparison.
Nice!
Like that harmonica sound, mate. If you're up for a collab, I'm your guitar man!
Awesome work, guys!
Steak89, liked the "S-s-s-s-steak89" you did, and it was a pretty tight piece of techno (son't know much about that kind of music, but I liked it). Transitions were amazing, smooth and subtle but still obviously "there". Moded, awesome part, liked that scratchin'. JoHobo, I liked your part the best, it has the most "real" feel, which I adore.
Can't wait for my group to get that grooviness goin', and this part just made me a whole lot more thirsty to see it finished!
P.S. - Keep on rockin'!
Eh....
The theme feels very Pirate-ish, and you've created that effect of funny pirates without a doubt. In the effect-creating department, you get "Employee of the Month". But the music itself - ehh... It can do better. The emphesis was put more on the sound effects (the seagulls, the shooting, the pirate laugh) and less on the music itself. It's supposed to go the other way around.
If this was meant to be a solo piece for the piano, you'll need chords. If you want to elaborate it a little more, more instruments wouldn't be a bad twist after the beggining, such as an accordion or something like that. It can be better and remain Pirate-ish. If you establish the feeling from the beggining, it will stay out throughout the entire song.
Final conclusion, try to take this as an intro and create a song out of it. Good luck!
P.S. - This is not too shabby for a first submission.
I'd take off my hat...
If I had one. Good job as always, mate, this time you're really risin' the bar out there. Hopefully we'll get to do anther collab sometimes, I'm working on this blues thingy that you might be interested in. I'll PM you when I have some shit recorded, stuff is kind of crazy at the moment but hopefully everything will work out and I'll be able to record and send things to you soon.
But back to the song. It's addictive. The cowbell is absolutely orgasmic. It's not catchy, it's fun to listen to. Good job!
The cowbell makes me hold my fist up and head bang with a ferocious face. Its so good, haha.
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